Sep 1, 2010

4 comments:

  1. The concept of a paper crane/origami is a cool approach.

    I am really drawn to #6 but I am unsure as to what the maple leaf plays into the city/idea. maple leaves are usually associated with Canada so I wouldn't make that a direct piece if at all.
    However this one still has a very modern/abstract cool feel to it. On the larger left white wing of the crane I could see a cool type treatment for Hiroshima 2020.

    same thing for #18 but how will you play the rings into that logo?

    #20 could also work out with using the abstract wave forms and the structural look. When I see it I think of the game Okami. If you are unfamiliar, try googling it to see the art direction of the game. I think that it could have a really interesting brush stroked look.

    Let me know if you need any other ideas.

    - Andrew Macht

    ReplyDelete
  2. I really love number 4 out all the interesting and cool ideas you have. I love the approach you took to these logo ideas. I really like how most of these are simple and geometric because they are simple and not too complex. Number 18 is also very nice because even though there is a simple concept there is still a depth in the way the graphics elements are placed.

    15 is also very interesting because of the simplicity of the building.

    ReplyDelete
  3. The ones that I think are the best are number 08 and number 11. Number 08 could work because the paper crane is a little more abstract than all of the other paper cranes. It is really interesting, in number 11, how you've combined a maple leaf with a paper crane.

    ReplyDelete
  4. i like 4 and 11. they were both nice and simple. they were also pretty. i love your idea of the paper crane and the flower.

    ReplyDelete